First Date

He paid for the movie, I paid for the drinks. He was attractive. I was nervous.

What did he think of me?

When the movie started, he held my hand. I turned to look at him, he kissed me.

Written for the yeah write micro prose competition. To read other stories and vote for your favorites, click the link below.

5 thoughts on “First Date

  1. The short sentences work really well for the first half of the story. For contrast, I’d have liked the last sentence to be a little more lyrical, less declarative. “When I turned…, he kissed” vs “I turned… he kissed.”

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